Priceless writing

October 16, 2011

Going to rain!!!

Filed under: My Poetry — Shalini Samuel @ 7:20 am

On a summer afternoon

Butterflies chase

Sun into the clouds

2 Comments »

  1. Good. You are right there… Just make sure fragment and Phrase arr distinct and well connected. This is a nature-nature haiku.
    summer noon…
    a butterfly wings
    into the dark clouds

    Comment by Ramesh Anand — October 22, 2011 @ 1:17 pm | Reply

    • :) Thankyou

      Comment by Shalini Samuel — October 22, 2011 @ 4:25 pm | Reply


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